Life is moving as per your ordained role
Steps are following the path as directed by your might
But still there are prayers for thou grace
Never awaken us for hatred, jealous, anger and greed
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I like this poem. It really is a good poem about the life which is blistful. Like it.
Santosh, I like this poem very much. I like the title a lot. Somehow all of us want a blissful life but why so few of us want to live according to the priniciples that bring about a blissful life. You very well outlined some fo these prinicples in this fantastic poem. The end of the poem is really touching my heart. So nicely said. Congrats, Santosh. A masterpiece.
The general idea of the poem is absolutely great. However, I feel as if your poems are translated into English. I might be wrong! Still, I think you are a very sensitive person capable of expressing yourself very eloquently. Keep up the good work! !
I'm guessing it about rivalry with Neighbouring country and your views of peace and tranquility. A follower of the Mahatma, I think you are. Neverthless, well written and compassionate.
had many symbols of life and i liked it but it depends on who is reading it to get there own understanding
Nice poem to read on blissful life! I enjoyed imagining about this life!
Bliss, is but the absence of the sadness all around us. Oh beautiful ignorance of that which do not need. In a moment utmost happiness utopia, a euphoria of our making we do try live. This is a great poem, keep up you excellent writing
A nice piece of peom. Thanks for sharing it with us. E.K.L.
powerful language and good feel.....Keep up the good work, sir
Beautiful prayer, Santosh, a delight and a heart felt write
Beautiful poem, guess we learn the bliss by learning the abyss first.
indeed a very nice poem. The last three line brings out the best in you. simply superb. Narayanan
Humble appeal to the almighty to keep one calm and graceful. It is really soothing to my heart.Thanks for sharing such a humble poem.Rekhamandagere
Yes, I liked it from the very core of my heart. The prayer has a great universality. Great words, great impact. A perfect 10. Thanks for sharing.....
So true and soft! I like this poem so much!