Sunday, June 12, 2011

Bliss Full Life Comments

Rating: 5.0

Life is moving as per your ordained role
Steps are following the path as directed by your might
But still there are prayers for thou grace
Never awaken us for hatred, jealous, anger and greed
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Santosh Sharma
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Undine Roxie 09 July 2011

So true and soft! I like this poem so much!

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Clara Odelia Ciutara 07 July 2011

I like this poem. It really is a good poem about the life which is blistful. Like it.

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Great lyrics' so real.....

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Hans Vr 01 July 2011

Santosh, I like this poem very much. I like the title a lot. Somehow all of us want a blissful life but why so few of us want to live according to the priniciples that bring about a blissful life. You very well outlined some fo these prinicples in this fantastic poem. The end of the poem is really touching my heart. So nicely said. Congrats, Santosh. A masterpiece.

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Omar Jabak 30 June 2011

The general idea of the poem is absolutely great. However, I feel as if your poems are translated into English. I might be wrong! Still, I think you are a very sensitive person capable of expressing yourself very eloquently. Keep up the good work! !

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K J 29 June 2011

I'm guessing it about rivalry with Neighbouring country and your views of peace and tranquility. A follower of the Mahatma, I think you are. Neverthless, well written and compassionate.

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Hilton Ball 29 June 2011

had many symbols of life and i liked it but it depends on who is reading it to get there own understanding

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Ramesh T A 27 June 2011

Nice poem to read on blissful life! I enjoyed imagining about this life!

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Narina Jones 25 June 2011

Its written so lovely Rated it a 10

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Ace Of Black Hearts 25 June 2011

Bliss, is but the absence of the sadness all around us. Oh beautiful ignorance of that which do not need. In a moment utmost happiness utopia, a euphoria of our making we do try live. This is a great poem, keep up you excellent writing

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Minu Alex 24 June 2011

ya...blissful! a plea for the divine presence

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Edward Kofi Louis 24 June 2011

A nice piece of peom. Thanks for sharing it with us. E.K.L.

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Abhay Vignesh L 23 June 2011

powerful language and good feel.....Keep up the good work, sir

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Anita Cross 21 June 2011

it was beautifull and well written inspiring to many great piece

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Beautiful prayer, Santosh, a delight and a heart felt write

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Seema Chowdhury 16 June 2011

very nice and a blissful poem. thanks for sharing.

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Miroslava Odalovic 15 June 2011

Beautiful poem, guess we learn the bliss by learning the abyss first.

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Narayanan Ramakrishnan 14 June 2011

indeed a very nice poem. The last three line brings out the best in you. simply superb. Narayanan

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Rekha Mandagere 13 June 2011

Humble appeal to the almighty to keep one calm and graceful. It is really soothing to my heart.Thanks for sharing such a humble poem.Rekhamandagere

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 12 June 2011

Yes, I liked it from the very core of my heart. The prayer has a great universality. Great words, great impact. A perfect 10. Thanks for sharing.....

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