Sunday, May 24, 2009

Bliss From True Love's Kiss Comments

Rating: 4.2

Coming is bliss
From true love’s kiss
That ever is
A kiss I miss
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Obinna Kenechukwu Eruchie
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 02 April 2010

Cutely you’ve floated kiss like colorful kites to be in lock-lip lolol…thanks… 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Kylie Lowe 03 November 2009

yet another beautiful poem =] i really think that you could have made it longer but i liked it none the less

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Howard Kern 04 June 2009

keep working, rhyme into a story or thought from start to finish. please, release, a grease, increase, and bless from a kiss. Who knows a kiss releasing hidden dreams embracing.true loves kiss writers write, but poets keep tinkering for perfection, Don't let anything stop your passion! ! !

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