Friday, June 1, 2012

Bliss Comments

Rating: 2.3

If I told you I don't feel alone
would you think I'm lying?
nobody is with me
I'm here all by myself,
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Kasia Fedyk
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Anita Sehgal 27 August 2012

alone in bliss without being lonely.....beautiful

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Anita Sehgal 27 August 2012

alone in bliss without being lonely.....beautiful

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Heather Wilson 09 June 2012

What a wonderful write, if everyone thought this way what a different world it would be, Bliss.

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Hans Vr 03 June 2012

Wow. This is fantastic. Let us ride all together on a wave of bliss.

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Mukta Sawant 03 June 2012

You have described your happiness very nicely. I loved your sentence formation skills.

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Unwritten Soul 03 June 2012

You can write as you can and it turn beautiful, maybe the honest and the sense you put it it really make it alive! _Unwritten Soul

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Simon Collins 01 June 2012

That's lovely words Kasia

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Captain Cur 01 June 2012

When I read your poetry I see your beautiful spirit flowing from each precious word. You must promise not to tell that Captain Cur is such a softie. It would ruin my reputation! I see a Spanish Galleon with my spyglass. Kasia no more cosmic love my way, until after I loot her. Good hunting!

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