~ Bliss ~ Poem by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

reading this poem is like taking a shower under the fountain of bliss to kiss life's parade...10/10 regards

I quite like the concept of the poem...I feel there is more that could be explored and imagined. Especially taking the first two parts of the piece. I guess bliss is such a concept of exploration in life that I wanted more.

I like but have to agree with louis, the bone needs more meat, Bliss is a big word, it is all of everything, maybe I was expecting too much after reading your title, hope I am not coming across as harsh, like what you do Niv, blessings Brendan.

Ahhh... to contemplate 'bliss'...nirvana to some...to others an ice cream sundae with whipped cream and a cherry on top! lol! ;) Remembering the value of observation makes one want to soar with eagles and watch troubles appear miniscule from a bird's eye point of view! May your fountain of endless happiness never run dry! Great write....full of sage wisdom! Thanks for sharing!

Nice...bliss or love already a poetry? Don't worry, be happy swallowing...

An intresting piece.

so much of grace, feeling and emotion in your words. Accept all tiny sorrows as trifling one Fill with love The voidness in life. sorrows, life and love. perennial themes. loved it

Excellent reflection about what made make life endearing!

A spiritual poem written by an enlightened writer.

Thank you for widening my perspective of your poems. The last stanza in this one has a deep resonance.