Friday, August 15, 2008

Bliss Comments

Rating: 5.0

The not knowing is bliss
Believing revealed it's self as hard
Understanding took it's time to know me
Forgiveness was easily seen yet not done
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Lorraine Bennike
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Nikunj Sharma 21 October 2009

not knowing is bliss, love the not knowing...even greater bliss...I liked the phrase trust is overwhelm.........rebuilding the walls....good sweet write Lorraine...keep up the good work.....read my poem called Home sweet home

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James B. Earley 17 August 2008

Quite an accurate assessment my friend!

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