Friday, February 5, 2010

Bliss Comments

Rating: 5.0

Bliss is the one on a swing
Who feels her years breeze by.
She creates the sound of a bell
And doesn't even try.
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Amy Marie
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Sarah Shahzad 11 January 2020

Wow! This is great? ? love how this feels as I read! :)

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Linnie 24 January 2018

i love this for linnei and enjoy it lv you

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Dr Antony Theodore 29 May 2017

Bliss compared to the sunrise inside.......... very nice imagination.. very nice poem. thank you dear poetess. tony

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Lynn Glover 20 January 2011

Very beautifully written, Any, as you seem to have the ability to draw the reader right into the poem. I could feel the breeze and hear the bell as I drifted through the peom. Great Job.

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Apothecary Montague 21 February 2010

wow, absolutely love this.

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Mar Cav 17 February 2010

What a sweet poem! Put a smile on my face!

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Bursting with beauty my friend.10/10

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