Saturday, May 13, 2017

Bliss Comments

Rating: 5.0

I want to run like I'll never reach the ending
I want to dive like I'll never touch the deep
I want to grow everything I ever lay my hands on
I want to breathe in afternoons spent asleep
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Maya Hanson
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Bernard F. Asuncion 20 May 2017

Touch the deep.... thanks for sharing....

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Rajnish Manga 13 May 2017

I want to know us like I've never known before I want to wrap up all the heartbeats when I kiss her I want to finish every melody like this //.... Superlative expression of a blissful time & life. Thanks.

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Denis Mair 13 May 2017

This is amazing. Instants of time usually operate by subtraction, ticking away whatever we thought we possessed. In this lyrical trance, the moments of time are swallowed up to become pebbles on a beach, or like stars in an endless constellation. This poem has fine combinations of words: HOLD EVERY FOOTPRINT, EVERY SHADOW…MEASURE ALL THE MINUTES IN HER POCKET…WRAP UP ALL THE HEARTBEATS.

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Maya Hanson

Maya Hanson

Fenton, MO
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