Blinking Ruins Everything Comments

Wow, how do you do this super subtle language thing that can move mountains in an eyeblink?

Thought sure it would be about a stereogram but found that is was about much, much more. So pleased to see that you welcome suggestions, so here goes: Shall we perhaps change ‘shoe’ to ‘shoo’? and the apostrophe in petals means ownership so perhaps we could delet that? Now that’s a very good poem that evokes so many word pictures that all of us wish to render into verse, especially those pink cherry petals falling in the spring. You’ve said it for us all. Adeline

Oh My... This Is Beautiful.I Know I Have Few Words When I Comment But Reading Your Poems Just Blanken My Mind. ~Autumn~