Blink Of An Eye
For,
in the blink of an eye
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A crisp and concise rendering of the nature of humanity in mimicry of nature. A beatific countryside bathed in sunshine may so suddenly become the anvil of crashing thunderstorm fury; so too the human heart. Smartly written, dear friend. :) S
Beautiful expressions in your poem dear poetess Annette, mysterious and magnetic, storm of sunshine, struggle, battle. The heart and the mind. So wonderful expressions which will make a poetic mind read and feed on it. Thank u dear.
Sounds like the typical woman to me! ! ! Okay, I'll be serious now. Truly, anger is a beast that lies inside all of us just waiting for a careless word or irritating trip to explode and, as you say, give even the devil second thoughts.This is an excellent piece of writing and I like the way you structured this poem- - from the adorable to the raging, that was quite a scenic trip. This is well worth a hundred 10's- - -10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
Love your use of imagery to convey those sudden changes in emotions. A very good poem.