There are things I keep doing,
Places I keep visiting,
People I catch up with,
People I spend time with,
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behold the love you have, doing everything for 'you'.....sweet and nice. Thanks...
The poem is very nice, however I dont know this is just a suggestion since there really are no rules for poetry, when you put ull instead of you'll..it gives it a what is a good word for this....less serious perhaps, impression...this is just a suggestion or the way i felt about it, other than that its good