Wednesday, July 30, 2008

Blink And You'Ll Miss Me Comments

Rating: 5.0

There are things I keep doing,
Places I keep visiting,
People I catch up with,
People I spend time with,
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silver phoenix 30 July 2008

The poem is very nice, however I dont know this is just a suggestion since there really are no rules for poetry, when you put ull instead of you'll..it gives it a what is a good word for this....less serious perhaps, impression...this is just a suggestion or the way i felt about it, other than that its good

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Catrina Heart 30 July 2008

behold the love you have, doing everything for 'you'.....sweet and nice. Thanks...

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