Monday, December 5, 2005

Blink And You'll Miss It Comments

Rating: 2.8

Call yourself alive,
Every moment you are dying in your skin.
You're not eternal
though the fires of hell are infernal
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Daniel Hooks
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Winnie Angel 23 January 2009

nice write on ur part..straight

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Alancia Lebogang Mogorosi 24 September 2007

wow, i love this one

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Lorena Walker 22 June 2007

'To regret your entire life you might as well be a walking abortion! ' what an amazing line!

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Suzan Gumush 03 December 2006

Sends a good message. I like this poem. Best wishes suzan

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Joseph Harskamp 16 September 2006

punctuation useually helps when writing poetry. it adds direction to your words. but I did like the message in this one. keep writing!

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Morgan Ederer 05 April 2006

wow i like this poem alot

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Gina PrettyBrownEyes 26 January 2006

great message in this one

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