Saturday, September 30, 2017
Blindness Comments
Rating: ★4.0
Have you ever seen a red headed Albino
Dressed in a white cloak
Have you ever seen the devil
Drink from the cup of Christ
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7/26/2025 5:17:05 PM # 1.0.0
I like the underlying premise, as well as the brevity and formal tone, but I don't see why you do away with all punctuation as if it were the plague! A little comma after ‘No’ doesn’t hurt, and perhaps you meant ‘if you’re too close’. Just a suggestion, and I only care to comment because this is worth a bit of polishing-up: it rises well above the average here.