Sunday, April 26, 2009

Blindness Comments

Rating: 4.5

you make me cry
then you wipe my tears
you sit trying to console me
after you feed my fears
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Jack Price 01 May 2009

Very good poem for me. I enjoyed reading it. It is full of anquish and sadness. I love the line : like the whispering cry of mayday into deft dying ears...... I will read and review all of your poems. Thanks for the invite! J. L.

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Ken E Hall 01 May 2009

Some don't realize what thy have got till it is gone, the poem is the makings of a good poet keep writing....regards PS I promp you

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Delicate Heart 26 April 2009

very good way of expressing your own agonies, it's just great........

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