Monday, December 26, 2005

Blindfolded Comments

Rating: 5.0

This mess is getting out of hand.
Or is it just falling into place?
Losing sense of what’s only pretend
I’m falling fast from grace.
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Jessy Liz
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Melvina Germain 14 September 2006

Another good write Jessy, I really enjoyed this, (10) ---Melvina

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Brian Dorn 11 June 2006

Jessy, great beginning, 'This mess is getting out of hand. Or is it just falling into place? ' And, an awesome ending, 'I will find my wings and fly in spite of what's ahead.' Very nice! ! Brian

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