Tuesday, April 28, 2009

Blindfold Comments

Rating: 5.0

this is the time in my life
when all i see is you.
a time in my life, when
i don't know what to do.
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louis rams
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 September 2009

you are with me 24/7, and makes me feel like i'm in heaven. so all i ask is that you take a chance with me. and i will set your heart free...........sometimes it results into blind folding of a person who sees nothign except lovee. this is delicate positionand it is true also that it may homest feeling with love... very beautiful feeling for beloved....10

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Ahmad Shiddiqi 09 May 2009

special way to express feeling! very impressive!

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Reshma Ramesh 06 May 2009

this is a sweet love poem.............well penned

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 04 May 2009

Love is vast like sky and deep like sea. It sets the hearts free. Love is in full bloom in this beautiful poem.......10/10. Regards Naseer

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Kesav Easwaran 01 May 2009

Love feelings lovingly expressed...blinded by love...well wrtten piece, Louis...10

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 01 May 2009

Truly love is 24x7 business................Good Write...........

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Kranthi Pothineni 29 April 2009

Well expressed and nicely penned. Few lines are really good. '24/7...heaven' a unique rhyming too. Well written.

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Christine Kerr 29 April 2009

The many things I enjoy about your poems Louis are their warmth and easy understandable nature, Thanks for sharing

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a lovely wrute sir..beautifuly done

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