Blinded Comments

I saw one line in this that struck me like a bolt of lightning! Unblind yourself with reality! I can't help but wonder, how many of us live in 'the way we want things to be' and need to be unblinded with reality? What a beautiful thought. Scarlett

Very good it this to your father or just a guy? I liked it either way (ha told ya I'd read your stuff!) Lylyanna

Great stuff...I can tell that you and your aunt are related...you both write well. Keep it up I se much promise in you.

Hi Crystal, I have to agree with Jerry and Ernestine. Fantastic stuff. Few teenagers are capable of putting their angst this well. this shows real promise. And this is the first one I've read. Many regards, Denis Joe PS. I am not taking orders from Mary, if I thought you were no good, I wouldn't have written anything, believe you me.

Now that was a lovely read, Crystal, it flowed beautifully and I felt every verse. Love Ernestine

Wow..........I am so suprised that you write....and that you write so beautifully Crystal! I am so happy you've joined this site! Sincerely, Mary

Crystal, you also must try to accept yourself and embrace yourself as someone special.

Very intense.....I'm sure they want the best but you should always be who YOU are regardless. Good Write!