Blind World Comments

I read it in awe! ! wow this poem is wonderful

I LOVE the 3rd stanza..........another REALLY great one.

i loved these blind words loool thanks for sharing

A metaphorical poem with the theme of death bringing forward the differences that exist in the world dividing people from people. In the imagery of two loves buried under darkness denying from the sunlight explictly states the meaning of life's brevity...Winnie

Nice poem, i like your repeatation to 'darkness' because it emphasizes the meaning.Merna