Wednesday, May 12, 2010

Blind Reality Comments

Rating: 4.5

you are the opposite of what everyone thought
we were close no matter how many times we fought
but this time its different...it is WAR!
i shall not defend you before others anymore
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Kitty Vans 21 May 2010

i love it it is very strongly written and it shows how many emotions can go through you at one point

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Kieran J96 18 May 2010

i love the poem, it is really well written, well done thnx ps i like the title also, totally fits what it represents

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very well written... i completely understand were your coming from... love it!

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Iron Panda 23™ 13 May 2010

woahnesss! ! ! heard it all loud & clear! ! .....soooo well written...ur point was made ->. there u see it? ? lol jk xP

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Emu Getachew 12 May 2010

Thanks for the invite...i can see the closeness and disappointment...very honest! Continue to write...

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Poetic Soul 12 May 2010

Well-written...very true indeed.

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Kevin Maroney 12 May 2010

Ahhh...... Sweet reality, revealed at last- Dissolusion wrought thou hast. One must face reality before they can master it. Good poem - keep up the good work.

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