Monday, April 28, 2008

Blind Narcissus Comments

Rating: 3.8

Waiting by the stairs, in the hall
Where the panelling is white
With moonlight: one vertical figure, black, upright
As principle.
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Richard Blanch
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Anita Atina 30 April 2008

Intriguing title and poem Richard I especially liked 'The half-knowing of memory' Cheers Anita

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~ Jon London ~ 28 April 2008

Fantastic write, the visuals leap out of this fine poem great piece all the very best J.L

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 28 April 2008

I like this poem. It reminds me, indirectly, of my most recent submission. It's like Part Two of it..or something. Nice work, Richard.

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