Blind Man's Dream Comments

Nice poem. "He fights.. and once again, he will climb out of presence into absence."… wonderful.5*

nice write. and once he will climb out of presence into absence,

John, How many versions of this poem have you written? Do you have a log of them? I believe I've seen at least 3, and possibly as many as five. I'd like to read them all if you have them available. What generally prompts the change? . I think the version here is perfect. I'm going to print it off and keep it because it may evolve in ways I haven't seen yet. . John, you are such a special poet.

i don't think there's anything in this poem that's out of place or jarring, the measure the words - the breath of the poem - is very natural, and i like the images.

A well penned poem, keep it up! You are in the right track and site, PH, you got my well deserved vote,10+++Love and Peace...(The One and Only) ...