Blind-Man's-Buff Comments

Really lovely. I could feel the events happening in my head as I read it. Do comment on my poem.

This is a very accomplished poem: the lines flow headlong forward, the speaker's voice never hesitates and that imparts to her words a quality of the inevitable. When she claims preternatural skills at the end, I'm a believer: I CAN HEAR THRU WALLS, / I CAN BREAK THEM DOWN. She is ready to excel at both halves of the game and invites her partner to another round! Do you intend the game to be a comment on ordinary affairs? WHAT I SEE IS A WOMAN LARGER THAN FATE: SHE CAN SEE THROUGH THE INTENTIONS OF THOSE AROUND HER - SHE WILL NOT BE DECEIVED.