Sunday, August 17, 2008

Blind Lover Comments

Rating: 5.0

When your rosy lips touch mine
I see the color RED.
Ask anyone who has ever loved
It won’t be differently said.
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Buddhi Hatharaliyadda
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C. P. Sharma 28 December 2008

Wow! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Love's lovely kaleidoscope that views colorful love patterns. CP.

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Wonderful using the image of the Chakra rainbow.You are a very versitlie poet writting in many different styles

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Ashraful Musaddeq 10 September 2008

My 10 for this sweet, cool and colorful poem.

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Indika Abayarathne 01 September 2008

First, the concept you have selected is very good... Second, the rhyming is there... Third, simple but meaningful... My best regards to you...

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