Blind Lover Comments

That's how goes the BLIND LOVER The arrow of blind cupid makes all of us helpless. Jigar Muradabadi an Urdu poet, I quote, Muhabbat keya hay taseere muhabbat kisko kehte hayn, Tera majboor kar dena mera majboor ho jana. (What's love and what are its effects, your act of making helpless and my becoming helpless) .......................10

Passionate telling of your feelings in this one

Loneliness is lying just beneath the surface of your words, touching our hearts with it's reluctance. Very well written, emotions and feelings standing upright and glaring at the blind lover. Succinct and beautiful poem, thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

would never know if she DIE I have to believe if she LIE Not even a thin cord to TIE Her tears will never GLITTER That's how goes the BLIND LOVER.....such a deep write, emotions are restored, wonder if love like this last forever, , keep writing its brill write

STILL NO BODY CARE DEAR LIZA

You are so lonely - it is felt by this poem.