Saturday, August 8, 2009

Blind Is The World Around Me! Comments

Rating: 5.0

Why to be involved,
when we both know
Together is what we'd never be!
Why than, argue and fight over being apart
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Faeza gilani
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Patti Masterman 08 August 2009

Ending lines carry the whole poem; very skillful language throughout.

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