Sunday, October 25, 2009

Blind Girl Comments

Rating: 5.0

Why am I living in this world?
That I can’t see
I don’t even know what my beloved brother
Look like
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Gloria Rose
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Pensive Phoenix 26 November 2009

Hi Gloria. I like the concept of your poem and I think you expressed it well. A thoughtful and inspiring poem.

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Shannon Hughes 18 November 2009

I really liked the poem. Very touching. But I aaree that being blind is better that living in the dark.

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yellowbell alamanda 17 November 2009

hi gloria! Blind girl is so touching. but remember that not only the eyes could be blind, also our being. somehow, its better to be blind than to live in the dark. I like your poem. give 8 votes... thank you for inviting!

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