The blue, blind dancer slips on the floor,
And enhances the movement itself in an icy dance.
This woman is transformed
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Your blind dancer is a poem in blue. Very compelling and beautiful. Your words have wings.10/10. Warm regards, Sandra
From: Dick Badian (Netherlands ;) To: Marieta Maglas Date Time: 11/2/2009 6: 52: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Re: forever yours hello Marietta. I promise i will get deeper in your work. I sniffed arround.saw some beautifull pieces.so as soon as i can find more time I will dive into your thoughts. kind regards stuiterdick
Very touchy poem like while reading we get absorbed in it. I guess you deserve 10
Some strong words, some wisedom within........great write! 10
For an absolute motion. From the depth of her soul, Divine lights Begin to overflow The space, And give it the appropriate, necessary meaning wow what a perfect and meaningful poem.. expressed in a very poetic and sweet way..innovation in thought and the composition of words and verses is professionally done... love this poem...hmmm really a great and very great one..10/10
A humanist poem.and humanity ..really a nice poem... from a good poetess ///
I love the idea of a blind dancer, I look around and try copying others when I dance, and pretty much constantly hash it up. In a way I wish I was a blind poetry reader, without influence, just me and my own style. Cool, thanks.
The space, And give it the appropriate, necessary meaning it is work of third eye with common sense and intense training.. beautiful write with vivd description and depth....10 read mine' no separate ways, tragic end and sister in lasw
I enjoyed reading this poem. Nice flow, and I always welcome them when they're short...
wow...that was very deep I LOVE IT. That is a very good peom, keep up the good work! ! !
I fly with this words, thank you for sharing! Lovely! !