Thursday, May 21, 2009

Blind Dancer Comments

Rating: 5.0

The blue, blind dancer slips on the floor,
And enhances the movement itself in an icy dance.
This woman is transformed
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Marieta Maglas
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Elena Sandu 13 March 2010

I fly with this words, thank you for sharing! Lovely! !

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Sandra Fowler 14 February 2010

Your blind dancer is a poem in blue. Very compelling and beautiful. Your words have wings.10/10. Warm regards, Sandra

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Manuel Odeny 05 January 2010

Beautiful description will words potrayed vivvidly. ++10

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Marieta Maglas 01 December 2009

From: Dick Badian (Netherlands ;) To: Marieta Maglas Date Time: 11/2/2009 6: 52: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Re: forever yours hello Marietta. I promise i will get deeper in your work. I sniffed arround.saw some beautifull pieces.so as soon as i can find more time I will dive into your thoughts. kind regards stuiterdick

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Maegan Trafford 18 November 2009

very meaningful write, well penned.... 10

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Lyssa Haley 18 November 2009

Very touchy poem like while reading we get absorbed in it. I guess you deserve 10

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Edward Parsley 18 November 2009

Some strong words, some wisedom within........great write! 10

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Richard Breslin 18 November 2009

A beautifully worded poem 10

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Jeremy Wright 18 November 2009

This poem brought tears in my eyes... 10

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Afzal Shauq 06 November 2009

For an absolute motion. From the depth of her soul, Divine lights Begin to overflow The space, And give it the appropriate, necessary meaning wow what a perfect and meaningful poem.. expressed in a very poetic and sweet way..innovation in thought and the composition of words and verses is professionally done... love this poem...hmmm really a great and very great one..10/10

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Ramin Chaman 27 October 2009

A humanist poem.and humanity ..really a nice poem... from a good poetess ///

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Agnes Parker 02 October 2009

nice poem....thank you for sharing 10

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Chesney Russell 15 August 2009

I love the idea of a blind dancer, I look around and try copying others when I dance, and pretty much constantly hash it up. In a way I wish I was a blind poetry reader, without influence, just me and my own style. Cool, thanks.

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The space, And give it the appropriate, necessary meaning it is work of third eye with common sense and intense training.. beautiful write with vivd description and depth....10 read mine' no separate ways, tragic end and sister in lasw

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Ramesh T A 20 June 2009

Nice poem to read! Floating or dancing it is difficult to feel!

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Justin M. Banks 16 June 2009

I enjoyed reading this poem. Nice flow, and I always welcome them when they're short...

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Rory Hudson 15 June 2009

A very appealing image and a poem with a lot of meaning to it.

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Autumn Stoddard 14 June 2009

The imagery is great in this particular poem.

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Lucero Flores 10 June 2009

wow...that was very deep I LOVE IT. That is a very good peom, keep up the good work! ! !

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Sathyanarayana M V S 25 May 2009

Very deep allusions...............good

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Marieta Maglas

Marieta Maglas

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