Sunday, July 9, 2006

Blind Comments

Rating: 5.0

i miss you like, i've lost my sight
insides too dark, outside, too bright
i miss you like, my chest feels tight
if we could arrange, tonight we might
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Patrick Tolan
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Ruby Root 10 July 2006

Hi Patrick, You are so compassionate. You are really talented, Again this is a beautiful poem I love this one and the other one. They are excellent. Take care and keep writing.

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Kortney Marie Cox 10 July 2006

Beautiful...It's rare that a poem strikes me in a way that I can totally relate to what the writer is conveying and feeling, but this one exceeded odds.

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Patrick Tolan

Patrick Tolan

Essex, England
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