Blind Comments

One of my biggest fears has always been going blind! Captured greatly, George! :)

Wow! This was amazing. I loved the way you made the clouds dance. You have an amazing way with words!

I really like that. But why’s it such a sad poem?

This makes me want sand in my shorts... In a good way. Its splendid

Wow...Just wow! I loved the imagery of it all I could just see and feel everything!

This is amazing. You capture the image of twilight perfectly. 'capture suspended time' 'pink flurries ballet with the flaming sky' 'clouds choreograph a dance' - this is amazing diction, my favorite lines from this poem. also, i don't know if you meant to do this, but i got the feeling that the narrator was blind, and hated being it, you know? you convey the despair of not being able to see nature's beauty, whether you meant to or not. seriously, this is an amazing poem.

Wow, this is amazing! I love all the imagery, and how the sun burns you. It is really good.