Thursday, May 7, 2009

Blind Comments

Rating: 4.8

naive and innocent
alone with my mind
no troubles stir inside
but are my thoughts truly alone?
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gabby chamberland
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Jacky Dorantes 15 August 2009

Deep, convicting. my type of poem!

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Irene Clark-hogg 10 May 2009

An excellent description of man's inhumanity. Must we keep our blindness in order to remain sane? Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Irene

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 09 May 2009

You have described a bitter reality with very strong notion. Keep writing, Gabby.......10/10. Best Wishes Naseer

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Fiona Davidson 09 May 2009

Excellent strong write Gabby...10++

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lonely and empty 08 May 2009

Very nice i like that one

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Carol Gall 08 May 2009

very nicely written 10 like it a lot

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