Wednesday, August 23, 2017
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You were just a shining drop on me,
making me forget everything.
I was drowning deep in you,
Forgetting myself.
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Astha Tiwari
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Jazib Kamalvi
23 August 2017
A great start with a nice poem, Astha. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks
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7/28/2025 3:33:01 PM # 1.0.0
You were just a shining drop on me ........................................................... And I am deeply go into you.Nice flow of feelings in a lucid style I enjoyed.Great start.Carry on dearAstha miles to go.Thanks