When pieces of my tainted life
scattered in the ocean of uncertain
I drifted in darkness without a pin of light
lost in a world of confusion
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The blindness and darkness of the poets world adds to a confusing situation that only the intervention of God can correct. Good luck and our prayers.
Nice reavealing poem of self, God is always there and he will light your path for sure...regards
well write dear poet, its very rich poem, u expresses ur eeling s in welldone way
A fervent write! ! ! Everybody deserves chances, you can always start all over again. Well done. God bless you! ! !
Sometimes we have to learn from the harsh life and its pain to understand the true meaning of regret and repent. A composure of inner submission to The Most Gracious God. Keep it up, my friend.
When we are surrounded by comforts, it is likely that we forget God's mercy and not bother to thank Him! In the dazzling glory of the world, we become blind! So trials are needed to maintain a certain balance! Great write!