Wednesday, March 18, 2009

Blim Comments

Rating: 4.3

(Note: An imagined dialogue between
me, a sixty-three year old,
and her, a twenty-five year old colleague)
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Diana van den Berg
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Alison Cassidy 20 March 2009

I suspect there is more than a hint of personal experience behind this very clever piece of imagined dialogue. I love the Winnie the Pooh reference in the first stanza, too. It really hooks the reader into your narrative and the name 'Blim' is worthy of Monty Python. How many times have we all imagined conversations when we display similar brilliance and assertiveness. Particularly when talking to a young upstart who takes others (particularly those of a certain age LOL) for granted. Wonderful piece of writing. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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