She opened her eyes and dawn
Entered her mind, falling
Into her heart it sparkled
With rose-petal joy, imparting
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Heart felt and beautiful writing. The brides of yesterday in the world wars and brides of today in wars miss their husbands. You touched me with your understanding and empathy. 10 Karin Anderson
A very beautiful poem Fay, with a sad twist at the end. I love the way you portray this bitter/sweet scene in such a masterful way I've given this an eleven out of ten - as it evoked menories of Taffeta and Chiffon. Of course I was arrested immediately afterwards Best Steve
Fay, Very beautiful a poem... though we did not escape from tears.......... 10... All best Tsira
This is tenderly written with a sadness affecting the reader..... Well versed Fay..10+..........Sue
Fay...... Lovely poem, happy and sad together. I hope it wasn't true and close to home. Keep well Martin
oh! ! my word! ! ! this is very touching indeed..! ! ! really felt these lines... your poems can touch many hearts Fay.. nice write! ! ! 10+++ with love shan