Wednesday, December 13, 2017

Blessings Of Night Comments

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Dark and dusky
And I call it black beauty
With fertilizing tears
They sprinkle water
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DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK
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Susan Williams 14 December 2017

Whoa! ! ! This is a great piece of literature. Remarkable word choice [with the exception of cute which I hope was a typo and you meant acute instead! ! ! ]. Intelligent but appeals not only to the mind but also the emotions of the heart. Deeper and deeper this poem probes and then that jewel of a closure. In every way this poem is Awesome! ! ! ! 10+++++++++++++++++++++

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 15 December 2017

Many many thanks......Susan........I am humbled

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 17 December 2017

Susan.........I took note of your valuable suggestion and appreciation that the word used cute should have been acute and I am agreed with you but since the theme was about the beauty of darkness I had decided to use the word cute but still yours should prevail......thanks a lot

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