Sunday, November 4, 2012

Blessing To My Daughter Comments

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I remember when my daughter was born,
She had such an adorable face
She was the best companion ever, so
I dragged her all over the place
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Kim Hilliker
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Abekah Emmanuel 20 September 2018

Very emotional and full of passion. What else could a loving and caring mother give to her daughter whom she loves so much, than writing a poem to express her feelings and fond memories? You couldn't have done more than this. Many people would ignore this opportunity and keep these memories to themselves, but you chose to share, and that's kind of you. This is an amazing poem. Keep writing!

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Khairul Ahsan 29 October 2017

'Then, I smile and cry simultaneously Because our time just didn't last, And I inwardly bless my daughter For every moment of our past.' - I also feel the same way about my grand daughter who has migrated to Canada with her parents. Nice poem, emotions eloquently expressed.

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