Saturday, June 6, 2009

Blessing Comments

Rating: 5.0

Hail to the long hairs alive
Through time and hell they survive
With strength and patience they hold their mind
Hippies touch and love all, ever so kind
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Deborah Cromer
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Roshni D'Souza 17 August 2009

Beautiful words that flow down the page. I enjoyed it. Thanks, roshni.

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Tsira Goge 06 August 2009

The long hairs, who have taught me with care Bless the long hairs, for they know love... .......................................................... Deborah, Very beautiful poem.... 10. Best wishes, Tsira

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Louis Rams 02 August 2009

the ninth line is what really caught my eye. knowing and believing with patience, in life they trust accepting that which happens, is not always just. a beautiful truth. a ten

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Are the 'long hairs' hippies.I was a flower child....a ten....

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rago rago 06 June 2009

well penned and expressed in an eloquent way...........

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Deborah Cromer

Deborah Cromer

Portland, Oregon
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