Tuesday, January 5, 2021

Blessed Garden Comments

Rating: 4.9

Let us walk barefoot into this blessed garden
Where pin drop silence dwells in serenity
And the red river flows under the bridge of emotions
And the adulterous arms of fate embrace life
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M. Asim Nehal
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Rebecca Navarre 15 May 2021

Oh, such beautiful feeling, heart and imagery painted! .. Filled with breath taking beauty! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++

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Shreya Hacks 18 January 2021

A wonderful poem, who would not wish to be here.

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Deepak S S 09 January 2021

Every word speaks separately.

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Suzon Albert 09 January 2021

Excellent..Eyes filled with starry dreams of surreal splendor And the garden has the fragrance of lilies all around.

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Rajan Trajan Renganathan 07 January 2021

Crafty poem. Well written Asimji.

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Deluke Muwanigwa 07 January 2021

Beautiful poem my brother. I can feel the emotion. Images and flow sublime. Well done

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Muzahidul Reza 07 January 2021

the red river flows under the bridge of emotions, , , , , , good imagery used

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Rajnish Manga 07 January 2021

The ethereal beauty of nature if seen through the eyes of lovers is just beyond words to express. Thanks a lot. I quote- Where pin drop silence dwells in serenity And the red river flows under the bridge of emotions

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Darren Jkoeryo 06 January 2021

DJ will be blessed to dwell in such garden.

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Kostas Lagos 06 January 2021

A dreamy place....

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Pintu Mahakul 06 January 2021

Where silence dwells with serenity there we feel the bless of Allah. Eyes are filled with starry dreams we realize this truth. This poem is completely very beautiful.

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Ricky Manhatten 05 January 2021

Very thoughtful poem with positive notes

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Zoyza Da Vinka 05 January 2021

Expressive poen.

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Michael Jack 05 January 2021

Every line is filled with positivity and hope.

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Varsha M 05 January 2021

Wow what a mystical garden it is...full of lillies and butterflies msking is colorful and bright...and dreams dwelling like embers of light...wow sir thus world is beautiful.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 05 January 2021

Let us walk barefoot into this blessed garden....a gentle and honest invitation. Beautifully penned......I liked the core of this poem.5 stars

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

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