Saturday, May 23, 2009

Blessed Blizzard Comments

Rating: 5.0

a spirit bursts out of the blue
sings a nostalgic rhyme of winter
about memory in glorious hue
it ascends and never comes back, never
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Michael Gale 23 June 2009

Hmmm.... The last four stanzas seem so, firmiliar? ... Great keying.(Penning?) . MJG... Of the world, of poetry.

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Lynda Robson 04 June 2009

Lovely flow to this charming write and dedication, 10 Lynda xx

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Eyan Desir 01 June 2009

very nice dedication.........

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the ending... was sooooooo lovely.

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The sparkling river sounds so invigorating and glorious and again a lovely dedication to another poet Jasmin. 10 Karin Anderson

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Louis Rams 25 May 2009

i agree with rajaram, that you sing for one and the same baby.

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Rajaram Ramachandran 24 May 2009

All love songs of yours sing for one and the same baby

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Carol Gall 23 May 2009

beautiful words for a beautiful poem 10

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Sonya Florentino 23 May 2009

'it ascends and never comes back, never' lovely line... for a wonderful poet, Ms. Jasmin Whyte...

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