Wednesday, October 18, 2017
Blessed Be The Rain Comments
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The golden orb awakes from flameless inferno,
stretching its tendril across vast plains.
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7/20/2025 11:36:56 PM # 1.0.0
i think you mean " to cause to abate" [slack/slake] in line 3 a fast-paced account of life and death in a desert. i'll take a dessert, not a desert! ! ! chocolate, please. too bad PH joins some of your words to others. ; ( bri :)
Hi Bri, you are absolutely correct I can see from the date this was submitted that it was one of the first I submitted and I was pretty ‘green’ about how to edit pieces then but that has hopefully improved over time, another frustration with PH is that it often ‘times out’ before comments are written and they are then lost grrr! Thanks again Bri x