Friday, September 24, 2010

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Expand my chest I got a breath
A rose protruding in it
Let me say goodby to my lonliness
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Aranthabailu Ummar
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Liza Sudina 27 September 2015

genius - so vivid description!

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 17 September 2015

As a weed in paddy field As a tendril in mango hill As a creaper in arreca plantation I was alone The expression of the loneliness is well expressed

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Hazel Durham 08 August 2015

Beautiful write with amazing imagery, thanks for sharing!

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Bharati Nayak 28 July 2015

Yes, bid good bye to loneliness as you are expanding. Nice write.Thanks for sharing.

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Marieta Maglas 03 September 2012

well expressed poem, thank you for sharing..........

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Seema Chowdhury 08 September 2011

A nice and a heartfelt write,

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Unwritten Soul 04 September 2011

You are blessed by this great talent, you are blessed to have that gifts...yet dont cry for something you not reach yet, one day a sand will turn gold coz your heart is not just a flesh but it a place for sweet soul..rise Aranthabailu and i like this poem very much, smile_Unwritten Soul

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Seema Chowdhury 31 January 2011

very nice and beautiful thought penned down. deep and reflective poem./thanks for sharing.

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Suja Nair 12 November 2010

Nice poem, I like it keep writing your thoughts.....

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