Sunday, April 13, 2008

Bless The Children Comments

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Inattentiveness, a heedless manner
Distress and sorrow, the World's yammer
Innocent little children, no toys, no play
Incredible struggles, suffered each day
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Lynn Glover 28 December 2009

Your words carried me right in amongst the children, and this poem should be required reading for all adults. We must learn to protect the wee ones. Good Write and good rhythem. Your friend Lynn

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A protector of the Children! It is wonderful to speak up for those whose voices are not heard. Well written

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Salu Salu 15 November 2008

A true and fair reflection of heart......compassionate and ardent lament.......shows good respect to humankind. it's a piece of heart rather than an art. keep writing..... Rgrds/Salu.

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George Sicillia 13 April 2008

so.............. nice but also so sad

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