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Bleeding Whisper Comments

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bleeding
hardly breathing
cold
almost freezing
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Carrie Sprouse
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Ben Gieske 17 January 2009

Bleeding Whisper is an interesting combination getting the imagination off to a good start and exciting curiosity. I like the first stanza with the three rhyming words lending new interpretation to each other. “Tear rate, fataly lost” is original.

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