How now my pain grows
my heart bleeds at every beat
growing in pain every second I wait
I ask my self what should I do
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Commendable work Eric...much potential lies within your mind's eye.Watch your spelling(stanza's 6 & 9..torched & torcher) Otherwise...job well done.Write On! ~ FjR ~ ..2008..
Write! It gives your pain direction and your soul relief. A release. Good write. H