Sunday, September 27, 2020

Bleeding Soil Comments

Rating: 4.8

The old fragrant floral vines
Deeply rooted in cultural soil
On being pruned suiting time
Demands changing definition
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Parameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair
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Dr Dillip K Swain 01 November 2022

A fantastic poem.... appreciated this value laden little but expressive poem dear poet.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 29 September 2020

Culture and traditions are deeply embedded in a society. They contribute a sense of comfort and belonging. Culture is our way of life. Yet, the demands of time can change the same. A wonderful poem beautifully crafted and executed.

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Thank you very much dear RMJ. When culture tradition is made to adapt to the present it will lose its subtlity beauty and character, In course of time it will be quite a different one

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M Asim Nehal 29 September 2020

How beautifully you correlated the change of vegetations to the human culture. Indeed the tradition is being mixed with the western culture and slowly and gradually getting diluted. It will become flower without fragrance. Thoughtful poem 5******

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Thank you very much Asim. You have rightly captured the soul of the poem.I am deeply wounded dilution of our culture and heritage adapting it to the need of time Cutting and pruning the flower plant can entail in its total ruin or the emergence of a new genus

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Suresh Kumar Ek 27 September 2020

A beautiful environmental poem. we are slowly killing our mother earth

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Thank you very much for the comment

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