Tuesday, October 13, 2015

Bleeding Pains Comments

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you were the sun i used to look into whose eyes
you were the moon i used to write verse upon
you were my everything i need to survive
you were the reason blood dont clot inside me
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Vishal Sharma
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Edward Kofi Louis 14 October 2015

Love and pain! But, try to be very strong once again. Nice work.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 13 October 2015

now being strangers i think you gave me that pain that was give by enemies....of course. It happens in love. A lovely poem that touches the heart. Thanks for sharing.......10

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