Sunday, September 14, 2008

Bleeding On The Floor Comments

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Honesty is the best policy
So let me
Rip my heart out
So you can watch me bleed
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The Dreamers Movement
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Laura Green 14 September 2008

can definately understand the sentiment that is vividly conjured up in the first paragraph, and the poem's conclusion. 'So you can watch me bleed Let me pour my Thoughts out for you to examine' expresses the vulnerability that comes with honesty in certain cases perfectly. nice work

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