Tuesday, July 11, 2006

Bleeding Heart Comments

Rating: 5.0

a bleeding heart is all that's left
in this shell that is me
where once a love lived
now nothing but shattered pieces
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Grace Hays
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Brian Dorn 31 July 2006

Grace, a stirring and emotional write ranging from the initial feelings of loss and betrayal to eventual acceptance and the ultimate demonstration of maturity and forgiveness. Very well done! ! Brian

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Lesa K 12 July 2006

Oh Grace, this is really good! So sorry for your pain and sorrow which bleeds into your words.

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Grace Hays

Grace Hays

Wichita, KS
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