Bleeding Heart Comments

great work keep writing please..

A very good poem. Keep on writing.

you maintained a nice flow, the second to last line is executed well. the tone is appropriate, great job

Hi Vikram, You've managed to show the pain of a bleeding heart very clearly here. How do we allow it to get to us like this? Love, always full of questions. Frank

This was a very touching sentiment for a broken heart.. Great imagery and a great use of words, well placed. Enjoyed reading this poem! May God bless us all-MJG.

a right emotion at right age in usual spirit. well. shan

a beautiful piece pain abounds within it.

I'm sure most sensitive individuals on this planet would identify with this poem.

I understand your pain..... This poem is similar to my poem ' My Heart Bleeds' by Lata Raaj.

it is so real feeling in your poem dear. it is heart touching too and i admire it from deep of my heart... keep writing and u may shine one day.....10 read mine mary to marry....miss i miss u

Beautiful love poem..........she is a full to walk away from someone who can write like you do

nice write...brings out the pain very well young ones feel while pursuing love relations...10

Nobody sees it... one with pure heart and pure love can only feel it....