Tuesday, June 23, 2009

Bleeding Heart Comments

Rating: 3.5

My MSN status says I’m available – how apt
as I sit rapt and read the mail. ‘Its not you
Its me – lousy timing’; my heart skips a beat.
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Black Mendilouche
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Susan Jarvis 24 June 2009

A plethora of emotion wrapped neatly in poetic technique - an admirable piece. S :)

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Sally Carter 23 June 2009

Wow, what a sensational poem. Really beautiful use of language. I'm grateful to Paul Hansford for recommending I check out your work. I shall definitely keep looking!

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