Monday, April 19, 2010

Bleeding Heart Comments

Rating: 5.0

Theres a bleeding heart in the garden; how appropriate.
I dont know where my lines got crossed and I
wish I could fully erase the lead mark you made.
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Monica O'Connor
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mohsin amin khan 24 April 2010

lovely poem my heart bleeds over these walls of her yard you filled me with the pub of emotions nice keep it up you have great going i saw your poems

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Lindbergh Hughes 21 April 2010

Such a wonderful poem! ! ! It was beautifully written and deeply emotional! ! I've read few works from Monica, but in all these few works, I'm sure, she has a great talent to write poems.The way she describes her feelings through the poetic language is amazing and wonderful! ! 'Bleeding Heart' is a great poem.And words like: 'where I fell off...I'm naive' shows those strong feelings hidden inside her soul which is very normal for a poet, no matter, if a man or a woman.

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Monica..i was wondering why aren't you writing much these days and just then you walked in with this bleeding heart of yours..and it bled very well.. :) i guess, you're always good. keep it up..and take good care.

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